Leni: WE DON'T DESERVE LOVE OR THIS TRIP TO THE BEACH!!!! Rita: Honey, please. And we asked, or rather demanded, they leave, that is when things got really ugly." (Lincoln picks up the remains of the squirrel suit, blows a spiteful raspberry to the family and runs off in fury and sorrow. Our parents grounded us to this room because we got in trouble yesterday. The parents were shown to be hypocritical at the end, telling their children to behave when they cause the whole family to be kicked out and then tricking them into going to Aunt Ruth's and letting them have a nice weekend at a homemade spa (yes I'm aware the Aunt Ruth thing happens more or less unintentionally but come on, it doesn't really make a massive difference). [knocks Pep down], [Lynn finishes her run and gets picked up by her family in celebration of her victory. The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. SQUIRRELS WIN!" Lucy walked towards him and they wrapped their arms around each other's shoulders. Said baby had an angry face and she glared at her mom and dad, "Poo poo!" Lincoln: You can't do anything right! I don't want this stupid bunch of brats in my life anymore! Lincoln: No! Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. Cuts back to now. Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. "That we had to learn about all of this when hotel security barged up to our room due to numerous complaints!" Maybe I should just quit the team. I will not be discarded and than used!! I was stupid to believe in luck and to rely on it. Lincoln returns the hug, rubbing her back), Lynn: "No, it'sNOT okay! See if I care! "I know you're headstrong sometimes, but I know that deep down in your heart, you love me. Lucy: So, that's it then? It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. Lincoln: Youre too stubborn to admit youre wrong, you never admit you mess up, your as gross as you are lousy and you never learn anything! "Okay," the woman says, "Surprisingly enough, it wasn't something those kids did." "What we're saying is is that you two are going to be confided to this building for the next 2 calendar cycles, only to leave for employment reasons or to get us sustenance from the one of our beloved stores." Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. ", Lincoln: "No. Years after his death, Lincoln is given the opportunity to see how his sisters are doing. No such luck alt ending5. We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." They also saw Lori in the front seat, Lynn Sr. knocked on the window. Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. The voice asked. This article should a part 2 episode in Season 5. Pulling out his walkie talkie, he said, "This is Hotel Officer Mooresfield. Just tell us and well let you skip it. loud. ", Lana: "Yeah, we know everyone needs to unwind once in a while. ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" We're supposed to be here until tomorrow. Pre-Story Notice: Hello everyone. (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! . "But you know what's not fair?" Lead walls will keep my bad luck from affecting anyone. That was my favourite bat! The sound of typing on a computer was heard for a few minutes. "Sigh. You're scaring even me. Morag: well, if you insist I suppose. tears began to fall out their eyes. ", Lincoln: "I know how much you guys like having me there for you, and I didn't want to upset or disappoint you. He's a big fan of you, Lincoln; and he told me that you're working with news. You can never come back. Any bad luck? (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! Lincoln then brought his arms back, suggesting a family hug. And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. "First of all, don't shout at me!," the woman said, in a tone that made Lola be quiet, "Second, if you give me a second, I'll sort this out some more." ", Luna: (opens her arms out) "Come here, bro." Lucy: This was all just a complete tragedy and not in a good way. ", Lincoln: "Well what are we standing here for? Luna turned to him with a glare on her face and said, "Forget it, dad! Lynn Sr. also tried to say something, but he couldn't either. White hair extended ending9. I thought you were my family! Lola: How could he?! Lincoln said, as tears started forming in his eyes. It's been a day since Lincoln tried to convinced them that he wasn't bad luck. (continues to cry. ", Lincoln: "Just hear me out." She's trying to say she was wrong, but her mouth is pathologically incapable of saying those words. While they were still upset about their parents' behavior and getting them kicked out of an awesome hotel, they understood why they did what they did and understood that they shouldn't had forced their parents to take them on their vacation. ", Lincoln: "But just because you lost your game, doesn't mean you have to pin it on me! ", Mascot:[in a familiar voice] "Hey, man! And he did not look happy. During that time, the parents spent time talking to each of their children and spending time with them during their activities. No Such Luck/Frog Wild Episode aired Mar 14, 2017 TV-Y7 22 m IMDb RATING 5.1 /10 218 YOUR RATING Rate Animation Adventure Comedy Lincoln is rejected by his sisters because he is "bad luck"; Lincoln and Lana protect the frogs from being dissected. Learn more. I already told you, I live here. Today I'm doing a new story called 'Hall Monster Linka,' as you can tell this a story that features Linka Loud and her brothers. My first story is done. Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. He leaps onto Lynn in a fight cloud, the two yell and shout over hits, kicks, punches, bites and headbutts. We would never force you to go if you don't want to. After he said that, he finally saw his kids' faces and immediately started backing away, but the kids stomped forward, towards him and Rita and they completely surrounded them. The way the security officer said, 'Right now,' made Luna nervous, it was typically the tone of voice used when someone was in very serious trouble. "WELL, NOW THAT I KNOW HOW YOU KIDS FEEL ABOUT ME! I do not own Loud House, Spongebob Squarepants, The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron, Wayside or Loud House Tales. Lincoln: Which is why Im making you all wear squirrel suits for the rest of your lives, [They all gulp. "What," Felix said, "what is it?" The siblings began agreeing with that statement, but Lynn Sr. and Rita were frightened. Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. #The loud house #lincoln loud #lori loud #leni loud #luna loud #Luan Loud #Lynn Loud #Lucy Loud #lana loud #lola loud #lisa loud #lily loud #the loud house headcanons #the loud . You can't ground us, we're the parents!" I hate presentations! Eventually, Rita broke the long silence, saying, "Kids, I know you're angry at us for causing us to be kicked out of the hotel. He just looks away as he enters the police car, and is driven away to jail. Then you'll be treated like irresponsible teenagers." He turned to specifically glare at the parents and added, "And just so you know, you're banned for life now. He then grabs one of the sofa cushions and screams all his frustration into it.). We know you are!". DeviantArt Protect. The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. Theres no need to shout. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. The Loud House Re-Write - Linc or Swim. It said "Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Im going crazy over you." ), Lynn Sr.: "Get ready kids, we're going to the movies again, but Lincoln is coming with us. Lincoln then explains to the viewers that with ten sisters, his schedule is always filled up, and . I hate the fact that you all act like spoiled brats! "Same here." Rita walked over to her side of their bed and sat down, put her hands on her head and started sobbing. We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. When my so-called 'family' gets home, I'm gonna have a talk with them." As long as I know that it'strue, I wouldn't let this stop me from loving you, or anyone else. Sam: Luna, I got your letter. Luan: Yeah, our luck has just run out! News flash; I live here!". Lola: Hey, Lincoln! Lynn Sr.: Come on, let's go find Lincoln! But this particular day, one of those children has been left out due to some "bad luck". Lynn sat next to her and wrapped his arm around her shoulder, in an attempt to comfort her. Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] Luna blushed. We had no idea this family could be so gullible. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Fortunately, there was no earthquake. Dont rage out at us. None of the kids wanted to talk to their parents and the parents didn't know what to say to their kids. WE DESERVE TO BE HURT!!!! I've gotten complaints of loud noises, stuff breaking and a possible brawl breaking out in one hotel room. Its a stupid mascot costume! ", Baseball Announcer: "Just look at our poor squirrels! And if you do, I'll have you arrested! We get it. Which she did. Thats what my problem is! Leni stared crying and the rest of them followed suit. Lincoln: Lana. This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." The way she said 'Don't Move,' made Lynn Sr. and Rita flinch in fright, they knew from Lori's tone that she dead serious so they knew better than to disobey, it worked all the time they did so it should work when she did it. Lincoln: And, you locked me out of my room. Lincoln blushed and hugged Ronnie Anne. Fool Me Twice extended ending10. ", Luna: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. "I can't believe you kids just did that," Rita said, tears running down her face like a river. Especially Miss. 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. by Jeffrey Gaskill 191 2 1 Lincoln was outside the backporch but he went through that window like it was unlocked and his so-called family return home from the baseball game and then they went ins. Yes." "Good," Jeffrey said, stepping aside and point to the doorway, "Now get out! Lori turned to face him, lowered the window and said, "What?" she responded back with, in a bit of an uninterested tone. "So you thought that the best way to find a ghost, which I know for a fact aren't haunting this hotel, was to knock out your air conditioner," the man said, as he gestured to the hole that once had an air conditioner there, "Do you realize how ridiculous and stupid you sound right now?" And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. Needless to say, they were not pleased. ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. Lincoln: I've had enough of this stupid costume! I've had an account on this website for about a year and a half now and this is the first story I'm doing for it. EVER!! He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window. She smiled as Lincoln took it. "You guys are literally going up the room right now and getting our stuff now!" The family think Lincoln is bad luck so they ban him from attending their activities.. Synopsis. Lisa: *Gasp* It's official! And once again, computer typing was heard and, after a couple minutes, she got her answer. (Tugs at it), (They tug and pull while the rest of the family backs away nervously). I need a very big, long rest from them. No more Loud Family? While we do so, sit on the couch and DON'T MOVE!" "Yeah Felix," she said, concerned hearing the pain in his voice, "What's wrong?" (The employee obliges, and the police arrive to arrest Lincoln, just as the rest of the Louds arrive.). Sighing, Rita turns to her children and said, "Look I know Aunt Ruth isn't your favorite relative" She was interrupted by Lynn Jr. saying, "That's the understatement of the century." Rusty has his own ritual before he plays with us. As in, how ill knock your head over heels! They are looking very heartbroken.). I know remaking this episode has been done to death, so this is probably the only alternate ending I'm going to do for this episode. Lori: WE'RE THE WORST SISTERS EVER!!!! Would you mind me speaking to Angus for a bit? Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Dont threaten your little sister! Suite and Sour / Back in Black. "WE HATE YOUR DISGUSTING PUDDING!" ], Lynn: "Lincoln, you could've tripped and cost us the entire game! CircularBoat742 19 March 2017 User blog:CircularBoat742. ", [The family and Bobby cheer for Lynn as she makes her run around the field. Incredible from The Incredibles on the cover. ", Lincoln: (To his all sisters) "All thoseevents I attended, was I bad luck? Journal. Kick the . Why did you kick me out of the house? Lincoln: Im sorry this happened. "Is that so?" And she knew it wasn't about any massive gathering of one group for some kind of event because she would've been notified way ahead of time. It was against the law. "Two outs in the bottom of the ninth, and the bases are loaded. "What's wrong with Aunt Ruth?" "Aunt Ruth," Rita said, trying to stop the kids from doing something they'd regret, "hang up the phone." Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. She started pacing the room, or more specifically around the couch. I hate that fact that you never make up for anything! Keep on writing fics like this! Lola: WE'RE HORRIBLE BRATS!!!
